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reflection – leslie fernandez

Leslie Fernandez Unit reflection 

This unit I learned how to write an ethnographic paper, a web genre paper and learned about the naciremas culture. For the web genre, I have seen papers like this before doing it made me realize how informational and fun these papers were. For the ethnographic paper I have never seen one before so doing it for the first time was a bit challenging but nothing I couldn’t overcome. The naciremas culture was also something I have never heard or seen before so learning about a different culture was interesting and informational.

I feel like I would like to know more about how to write a really good web genre paper because I would like to write one in the future. 

I believe my strength in my final project article was how much I knew about the topic. It allowed me to really go into detail about the topic. 

If I was to revise my final project article I would probably do an accurate advertisement example ( I just included a picture and explain why my advertisement would be successful. 

I would rate it a 7 because although my work was late I was really interested in all the assignments given to me. 

The examples given to me really helped me be successful because I was able to check and see if what I was doing was right. 

I want to leave behind turning in late work and I want to bring into the next semester my engagement and interest in the assignments. 

My favorite unit was actually this one because I feel like we were given alot of freedom with the assignments given. 

I think you did really well this semester especially since it was asynchronous. 

Writers Resume- Leslie Fernandez

Leslie Fernandez

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Writer’s Resume

Writers Education

several variations of english classes throughout four years in high school

English 201

English 101

political science 101

Academic writing

College personal essay

Final Paper on Classism in NYC

Natural Science Paper

Effective and Ineffective advertisement Final mini- project

Creative Writing

Poems

Fictional stories

Ethnographic writing

Social Media Writing

Instagram ( expert)

Snapchat ( expert)

Other Genres

Email, Professional

Blogging

Research articles

References given upon request

Final mini-project… Leslie Fernandez

Leslie Fernandez

Olivia Wood

Final mini-project

12/14/20

 

                                                 Instagram advertisement posts

Instagram was created in 2010 along with snapchat and other internet outlets. Instagram was specifically used to post pictures and videos of yourself and others in real time. It was to check up on how your friends are doing or your family but it was not what it is today. Today instagram is one of the biggest social media outlets in the world where not only do people advertise products and clothing but in fact make five to ten minute long IGTV videos. Instagram has evolved tremendously  and now due to the app’s popularity we can analyze the difference between an effective and ineffective advertisement. 

Advertisement on instagram is mainly used to grow a brands exposure meaning most of the time many instagram users will promote the brand by using one of their materials in a photo, video or instagram story. The famous Kardashian family is known to successfully advertise materials, clothing and more and this is simply because many people trust their reviews. The Kardashian family is boujee, very classy therefore when they use a material or a brand that is not their own or their families the people trust that this material is good. A successful advertisement comes from a well known and trusted instagram user. 

Adding on, instagrams  users need to have a trend when they advertise products. Taylor Giavais is known for being very connected to nature, spirituality, knowing a lot about mental health and all things related to babies. When Taylor advertises something it is usually about something she constantly speaks upon such as crystals or an organic baby product. This user only posts and advertises things that are familiar to her likings and for her to continue that trend will only make people more and more interested in the product she is advertising. 

An unsuccessful advertisement would be from an instagram user called Danielle Cohn. She is sixteen years old and has gained a following because of her music and her daily life that she constantly posts.  Due to recent events Danielle has gained a negative following and many of the things she advertises are seen as cheap and untrustworthy. When users have a negative following meaning that most followers come to hate instead of love. When users have a bad reputation and constantly do or say things to make matters worse they loose respect and lose followers making it even harder for them to advertise the product. 

If you want to successfully advertise products brands want you to sell then follow these four steps. First, gain a following and have at least more than ten thousand followers. You want these followers to be interested in one or two specific things and this can be lifestyle, food, etc. Then you want them to trust you and see that all products you are advertising are worth their money and time. You want to do this by first having a good reputation as a person, and secondly have a lot of background knowledge on your trend ( your instagrams focus) and make sure what you are advertising connects to your trend. People will believe that you are selling this because you personally believe it’s good for their well-being and they trust you have used it before since it goes with your lifestyle/trend. Next, do not advertise too much or else your viewers will become tired of your posts and skip right past it. If you are going to advertise several products spread them out into your month and post one advertisement at least weekly. Lastly, don’t stress so much about it! Yes it is making you some pocket money but it is not your main priority. 

Advertising on instagram is one of the most effective selling campaigns due to the apps popularity. All it takes is for Kim Kardashian to come up on your screen and tell you that this is the straightener you need. Successfully advertising on instagram  can be incredibly hard but with the right audience and focus it is achievable. 

If I was to promote this on my instagram page, it would fit my trend because I mainly post fashion and lifestyle photos. Here I would be advertising this Tommy Hilfiger sweater and if I had a large following my followers would be invested because this is a famous brand.

ethnographic paper – Leslie Fernandez

Leslie Fernandez

Olivia Wood

Ethnographic paper

12/1/20

An ethnographic analysis of the Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardy

 

Field notes: 

 

For my ethnographic analysis I chose the Hogwarts school of witchcraft and Wizardy to observe how they handle their everyday life. The life of a Hogwarts student I would assume is always chaotic due to the fact that they have to practice magic, defeat evil and constantly do school work all at once. 

 

 I arrived at Hogwarts school during the time the Americans had their annual Thanksgiving. When I first arrived at the school it was fairly large and so I asked for someone to guide me along the way. The student Hermonie Granger was my guide and my informant for my study. Professors that I passed acknowledged me, were friendly and told me that Hermonie is one of the best students I could have chosen for this study since she is one of the most intelligent pupils in this school. 

     Hermonie led me into several rooms in which I sat independently to write my observations. Many of the rooms I stepped into were warm, filled with twenty five students or less that were dressed in different colored cloaks. An informant in a potions class informed me that these colors were based on the “ house” each student lived in. The houses were RavenClaw, Hufflepuff, Syltherin and griffindor and each house had an animal that represented them. The raven claw house had an eagle, grffindor had a lion, slyhterin had a serpent and Hufflepuff had a badger. When classes were dismissed many students just acted like regular teenagers. Some were making out in the corner of the hall while others were laughing or arguing with their friends. Hermonie introduced me to her friends Harry and Ron and they told me a little about life here at hogwarts. Harry stated that he felt at times overwhelmed since supposedly he was “ the chosen one” in the wizarding world. Being overwhelmed caused Harry to be behind on homework and be less social with all of his other classmates, he said. Harry was known to fight often outside of Hogwarts since he is one of the most wanted students ( not because of misbehavior). Ron stated that he has it easier than Harry as his family eight most of the time helped him with homework and issues he had with his other classmates. It seems that when students have more of an emotional support, they tend to perform better in school. 

As I walked into court yards to observe other students than Harry and Ron, I saw that many students used magic outside of class. The magic they were using were to do simple things such as fetching their backpack or jokingly give their friends a tail. There weren’t many professors around and if they were many told students to head to class or go back to their house. 

The school was decorated a lot by frames of famous wizards or weird frames that talked back to you. Candles were set along the wall to illuminate the halls and dining room and instead of a lift, students used moving staircases to get where they needed to be. When I arrived into the houses ( which were all decorated differently) all students had their own bed and girls and boys were separated. The Hogwarts house rooms smelled like cookies whereas the slytherin smelled like alcohol since students over eighteen can drink. Everything in the Hogwarts school did not seem new but it made sense that the school had to have an old fashioned vibe. 

 

Introduction: 

 

The Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and wizardry was built in the tenth century by four powerful great wizards named Gogric Griffindor, Helga Hufflepuff, Rowena Ravenclaw and Salazar Slytherin. Without prior knowledge, the arcitehcutre of the castle/building shows how long this building has been around. Ivy covers the exterior of the building where it hugs the stone walls that make up the school. Where there’s a wall that isn’t covered by a moving  painting there are flags with three colors green, blue, red or yellow. Thousands of students from ages 11 to 18 fill the hallways where they rush to go to their next class to learn about magic of course. Learning magic at hogwarts is the main focus and teachers encourage their students to use it to their smartest and best ability. 

I chose to focus my research on the Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry because they exhibit dedicated students who give their time to study magic while living normal teenage lives. Students who I studied were known for being highly intelligent and well rounded. 

 

Hypothesis: 

 

I chose to focus on the question of how do these kids live a double life by balancing fighting evil, being social with their friends yet still turn in their english papers. It astonishes me how committed many students are to being top of their class. 

 

Research: 

 

The day begins at around seven am yet many students are awake before then pulling all nighters. Fog fills up the outside open hallways and the day will usually stay gloomy due to Scotland weather. My study focused on four main classes such as potions, transfiguration, defense agains the dark arts and muggle studies. Classes are mixed with all houses but some have more students from one house than the other. No class is for just one house; it solely depends on the students interest in the class and if they need that class for their necessary exams. All classes begin at seven after the morning breakfast that begins at 6 am and all classes end at two pm so students have the rest of the day to complete assignments. 

I asked one of my informants, Hedwig if they consider the course load to be too much and she responded that it really depends on how you are as a student. This was expected of her to say since this is the situation for many students. She added on by saying it matters how students manage their time and how much effort they put into the homework. To get more than one opinion I asked another informant, Draco Malfoy if he believed the course load was too much. He said the work is overbearing and he cannot keep up with the work he is doing while “ fighting with who must not be named”. The difference between Hedwig and Draco is that both students have two completely different lives outside of school therefore their views on the work they have to complete is very different. 

Something else I took note of was how many students were involved in activities or sports and surprisingly the majority of students were in fact involved in a sport called “ quidditch” or they were in clubs. Quidditch is a game where two houses like griffindor and slytherin battle against each other and try to score points as they fly on their broomsticks and shoot the ball into the hoops. This was something completely unexpected for me because these students were busy enough with their personal, social and academic life therefore how could they fit anything else into their schedule. Many informants stated that sports and or clubs were a way of de-stressing and for some, live a normal teenage life. Students who were not involved in sports were still number one fans for the quidditch team and went to almost every game that hogwarts held. 

The last thing I took note of is their social life, did the majority of students have a large group of friends or a small group of friends. Students who have a large group of friends are more likely to be more social whereas students with a small group or no group are less social. This was essential for me to research because I wanted to see if even the busiest of students cared about having friends or had the time. I asked one informant named Harry if he is social due to his circumstances. Harry stated that he has about only two friends, yet those have been the most loyal and carrying. He decides to keep his circle small for the sake of his own life but even if he did find more loyal friends than his own he would still keep it down to the two. 

 

Analysis: 

Being a wizard/witch at the hogwarts school is incredibly challenging, but with the right mindset and friends by your side it may be somewhat easy to get along. The school is made up of very persistent students, all dedicated to their work and making sure there is peace outside of their academic world. Although some may be stressed, the school stresses all kids end with high marks in which majority does. At the end of the day these kids are normal teenagers, with an occasional fight against the dark side.