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Digital Lecture: What is Ethnography?

Ethnography has two root words: ethno, and graph. Ethno means “race, culture, or people” — like in the sense of an ethnicity. Graph means “write” — telegraph, graphite, graphic, photography, phonograph, monograph, etc. So, ethnography literally means writing a culture.

Historically, ethnography is the primary genre used by anthropologists — scientists who study humanity as a whole. Biological anthropologists study human evolution and our physical bodies, cultural anthropologists study our cultures, linguistic anthropologists study our languages, and archaeologists study the belongings, buildings, and trash we leave behind.

“Ethnographic writing” refers to writing that may not be “an ethnography” but uses a similar approach. Ethnographic writing can appear in a variety of academic disciplines– education research, sociology, psychology, English, geography, history, and more.

Brief Anthropology History Lesson

The history of anthropology — like pretty much every area of study — is pretty interwoven with racism. Biological anthropologists (along with medical doctors) are responsible for some of the beliefs that people of different races are better or worse physically, or that their bodies make them better or worse mentally or emotionally. Anthropological research was used as a justification for a lot of horrible things.

Anthropology as its own discipline started in the 1800s, although people wrote “ethnographic” notes long before that. For example, Julius Caesar (Roman Emperor who lived in the B.C. era) wrote some ethnographic notes about the Gauls and other “barbarians” he met while conquering parts of Europe as a general.

So, cultural anthropology, the subfield that solidified what “ethnography” means in the modern sense, mostly took this form in the 1800s:

  1. An economically privileged white man (maybe not rich, but certainly with financial advantages in life), originally from Europe but later also from the U.S., would travel somewhere “exotic” to find some people who aren’t part of European/Western culture.
  2. He would live with them and talk to them and do stuff with them for a year or so, studying them and taking notes.
  3. Then he would go home and write a book describing their culture. They became “his” people, and other anthropologists would have to go find someone else to study.

You might already be able to think of some of the ethical problems with this. Anthropologists often did not ask permission to come study people, or give much back to the community they were staying with. Even though anthropologists try to understand other people’s way of life from their own perspective, they often failed, either by accident or because they were judgy and thought Western culture was superior. They often took things back with them, to sell or donate to museums. Sometimes they tried to impose their own ways of life upon the people they were studying.

So, a lot of it wasn’t good. At the same time, the discipline of anthropology has accumulated a lot of information about the very diverse cultures of humanity, which means there’s a lot of data on how what Western culture considers “just human nature” or “the normal way to do things” is not normal or human nature at all. For example, the first ethnography to go mainstream (as opposed to just being read by other anthropologists) was Coming of Age in Samoa by Margaret Mead (1928). People in the U.S. were really interested in this ethnography because Samoan teenagers didn’t exhibit many of the behaviors or moods associated with “just part of being a teenager.” They fought with their parents a lot less, for example, and seemed happy overall, as opposed to the stereotypical moodiness of American teenagers. Mead thought that this was because Samoan teenagers (at the time, at least) had a lot more freedom and trust than American teenagers, especially in the 1920s. It wasn’t controversial for them to have sex with each other. If they didn’t want to live with their parents, it wasn’t a big deal for them to go stay with a friend or another family member for awhile.

Modern Anthropology

While there are still plenty of ethical issues in the discipline of anthropology and in the genre of ethnography, anthropologists are by and large trying to recognize the racist and sexist histories of the discipline and reinvent their research practices.

Some key changes:

  1. Many more anthropologists study parts of their own cultures. There are now lots of ethnographies of different aspects of mainstream U.S. culture. Usually, ethnographies no longer try to describe all of an entire culture, but will instead focus on a key area (like a particular town) or group of people. For example, the punk scene.
  2. The discipline is more diverse — it’s not just white European and American men studying everyone else (although there is definitely a lot of improvement still to be made here).
  3. Many anthropologists practice applied anthropology— that is, using anthropological methods to try to figure out how to help a community. (An example might be an anthropologist going somewhere where the opioid epidemic is really bad to talk to people and figure out what aspects of their life situations lead them to getting addicted to opioids and what other factors are contributing to their struggles.)Applied anthropology is often used to craft public service announcements or promoting other public health initiatives. For example, how can you convince _____ group of people to use condoms, if they don’t want to use condoms?  I think a good use for an anthropologist right now could be, “For people who don’t want to take coronavirus precautions like masks and social-distancing, why not, and what would convince them to do it?”
  4. Many anthropologists work or volunteer at the place/with the people they are studying, as a way of being helpful and giving back to the community instead of just taking up time and knowledge and resources. For example, when David Valentine was researching the lives of trans people in downtown Manhattan in the 1990s, he was also working at the LGBT Center to help provide people with medical resources. Working at the LGBT Center gave him additional opportunities to meet and talk to people, but he was also making a positive impact.
  5. Many anthropologists do collaborative research, where instead of just showing up and doing a study, they work together with members of the community. The anthropologist might ask, “What kind of research would you like to do?” or “What would you find it useful to have?” Sometimes this takes the form of oral history collections to preserve a community’s stories and lives, or language preservation, in cases when only a few people in a community still speak an ancestral language, so the language is at risk of dying out.

Back to Ethnography

So, just as the discipline of anthropology has a gross history but is evolving, so does the genre of ethnography. One issue with ethnography is that it is originally a scientific genre, with all the claims to “objective truth” that come with it. Another issue is that word choice and the author’s perspective can embed a lot of bias (usually negative) into the writing, just like we talked about with news writing. The anthropologist may not even realize they’re doing it.

One important change in ethnography is that now it’s much more common for anthropologists to talk about themselves, and explain their relationship to the people they’re writing about and their own position in society, and to reflect on how that might affect their perspective. Whereas an anthropologist back in the day might try to “fade into the background” of his ethnography and pretend he was just an invisible camera watching the people, a modern anthropologist might talk about who she is, her own emotional reactions to her experiences and what she thought about it. You can never fully escape your own bias, but by trying to be as honest and transparent about it as you can, you can help the reader to put the information in context.

Many college classes have “mini-ethnography” assignments. When I was in college, we all had to go to a restaurant near campus and conduct a mini-ethnography of the restaurant. We had to sit there for about an hour, eat some food, and observe everything that happened around us. What kinds of people came in? What kinds of things did they order? How did they interact with the employees? What was the vibe? Then, we went home and wrote about it.

So, the general process for an ethnography is:

  1. Go to your “place” (place is in quotation marks because you could also do an ethnography of an internet community) and spend some time there. Observe how people act and interact, and what kinds of people are there. This is called your fieldwork.
  2. Take notes on your observations, but don’t be weird about it
  3. As soon as possible after your fieldwork, write down everything you remember noticing in as much detail as you can. These are your fieldnotes.
  4. Write an article describing your findings.

An ethnography will often follow the same general form as a scientific article, but it’s less strict. You can say “I” and talk about yourself. You should still talk about your research methods, your results, and do a discussion of your results, but these sections can be mixed together more if you want. You should still try to be thorough, as objective as possible, and always back up your ideas with evidence. You should definitely write about any expectations you had that were wrong, or times when you had to revise your interpretation or opinion.  More on this in the assignment instructions!

Now, please click back to the Week 12 instructions page and check out some examples!

Unit 4 Overview (11/9-11/22): Social Science and Ethnography

Welcome to Unit 4, our last “real” unit! After this, we’ll just be building your portfolios and doing a mini-project about a genre of your choice.

“Social science” is actually a super broad set of disciplines with many different genres and sets of writing expectations. Some social science writing looks very similar to natural science writing. Other examples and genres may not. In this unit, we’ll be focusing on ethnographic writing. I will write a digital lecture about what “ethnography” and “ethnographic” means for you to read during Week 12.

This unit will be quite short, since we’ll be building off of some of the principles of academic and scientific writing we already covered in Unit 3. Here’s an overview:

Week 12: Introduction to Ethnography, Writing a First Draft
Week 13: More on Scientific Bias and Genre, Revising
Week 14: Reflection/Finishing Up, Starting Portfolio

We’ll also be doing another round of peer review. Please fill out Peer Review Survey #2. 

Writing For This Unit

This unit, you will be writing only one major creation— an imaginary (or not) mini-ethnography. You will write at least two drafts of this mini-ethnography.

Grading/Checklist For This Unit

The Social Science rubric is worth 20% of your overall grade (this is 5% more than Units 1 and 2, and the same as Unit 3). It will be graded out of 20 points. This means that each thing is worth a little more than in the past units, because you have fewer things to do.

  1. Annotations/Commentary (Week 12)– 2 points, completion
  2. First Draft of Mini-Ethnography (Week 12) — 2 points, completion
  3. Peer Review (Week 13) — 4 points, completion + thoroughness
  4. Revised Draft (Week 13) — 10 points, see rubric
  5. QuickStart Workshop 4 (past) — 2 points, completion
  6. Unit Reflection (Week 14) — 5 points, see rubric

Total: 20 points = 100% for the unit
100% for the unit = 20% of your final grade.
**I will input all the math into Blackboard so you don’t have to worry about calculating what this means for you**

Extra Credit

There are still a number of extra credit opportunities this semester. Specifically, you can attend a Writing Center Workshop or make an appointment with them for a 1:1 discussion of your writing. I will receive a spreadsheet with an attendance record at the end of the semester, and will apply the points then to wherever will mathematically benefit you the most.

Week 11 (11/2-11/8): End of Unit 3 + Breathing Week

Since this week is Election Week and also near the middle of the semester, I thought we’d take a chill week to reflect and rest and maybe have a chance to get caught up on things.

Optional Zoom Class: Monday, 10:50am

Due Dates

The only things due this week are your Unit 3/Mid-semester Reflection and an extra credit assignment about the election. Points from the extra credit assignment can be applied to Unit 1 (because it’s news) or Unit 3 (because it’s our current unit). Both assignments are due Sunday, November 8.

I’m designing the election assignment to be completable before any results are in, if you would prefer to do it then.

Goals For This Week

  • Take some time for whatever you need some extra time for
  • Reflect on your work for this class and give me some feedback on my work for this class
  • Turn your critical eye to the political news

Overview of Tasks

  • Write your Unit 3 /Mid-semester Reflection
  • Optional: Complete the extra credit election week assignment

Unit 3/Mid-Semester Reflection

The reflection will be graded out of 5 points according to the same rubric as the Unit 1 and Unit 2 reflections.

  1. What do you feel like you learned this unit that you didn’t know before?
  2. What did you already know , but now understand better or learned more about?
  3. What (if anything) do you feel like I wanted you to learn, but you still aren’t sure about?
  4. What are the strengths of your final project article? What are you most proud of?
  5. If you were to revise your final project article, what would you want to do differently?
  6. How would you describe or rate your participation/engagement in this unit?
  7. What did you do this unit that helped make you successful?
  8. What (if anything) do you want to do differently in the next unit?
  9. Please complete the sentence: “This class would be better if……”
  10. For you, how did this unit compare to the News Unit and/or the Humanities Unit?
  11. What (if anything) from this unit would you like to discuss/think about/explore further? (either this semester or just in your life)
  12. What would you like to see in the remaining weeks of the semester?

Election Week Extra Credit

The 2020 presidential election is more complicated than Trump vs. Biden. For one thing, there are many different reasons people have to vote for one candidate over the other, or to vote 3rd party, or to vote for no one at all.

This week, please find news articles that express as many different points of view on the election as you can. Use the skills we practiced in Unit 1 to identify sentences or word choices that indicate the writer’s perspective. Try to find examples from the 3 major types we studied: informational, analytical, and opinion. It will be easiest to identify point of view in the opinion articles, so challenge yourself on the other two!

Please list what you find with a link along with a description of what you think the point of view is and what makes it different from other perspectives.

Optional: Striking Example of Data Visualization Differences on U.S. COVID Maps

I was just on Twitter and saw the picture of the second map I’m going to show you, and was shocked to discover it’s from the New York Times, since it’s so different in design than the other New York Times Covid maps I look at every day.

Here is the first map, the main page of the NYT’s coronavirus tracker.

And here is the second map, part of an article published earlier today.

Now, there are two main reasons for the differences between the maps.

1. They are displaying different information.

The first map is color coded according to cases of coronavirus per 100,000 people in a given area over the last week. The second map is looking at when each county hit its covid peak– within the last month, or within the last week. These datasets are related to each other, since you need to have a lot of recent cases in order to have your peak of cases, but they are not the same. So that’s part of why.

But there is another reason. One that I think highlights how the first map is often misleading about how the coronavirus is affecting parts of the country, particularly in the middle.

2. They’re using a different rule for how to draw the colors onto the map.

On the first map, while lines are drawn according to county, the coloring is not. Or at least, they’ve colored in by county in the East, but not out West. Take a look at Montana  (or any of the other large states just east of California) and mouse over some of the counties– even though the county as a whole has X concentration of cases and has an alarming graph, only some parts of the county are colored in, likely where the population is concentrated.

On the second map, entire counties are colored in even in those same Western states with small populations. This makes the situation in those states look WAY WORSE than the first map! The first map makes it look like the virus hasn’t even reached large portions of those states, when in reality, there just aren’t many people who live in those areas. For those of us who live in more densely populated areas, it’s easy to assume that there are loads of people there and just nobody’s getting sick.

Both maps are representing virus data from the last 1-4 weeks. So, the areas with the worst situations are the same. But they suggest pretty different things!

 

 

Week 10 (10/26-11/1): Natural Science Writing Cont.

Welcome to Week 10, the third week of Unit 3. Click here for a full unit overview. This week, we’ll be looking at some more examples + analysis of academic writing in the sciences and revising our drafts based on peer feedback.

Optional Zoom Class: Monday, 10/26 at 10:50am

Due Dates

There is only one thing due this week– the revised draft of your imaginary science article. For examples of what this can look like, please see the examples posted in Week 9 or explore the other imaginary science articles at Science Creative Quarterly. 

Revised drafts are due by the end of the day on November 1 (Sunday). 

Goals for This Week

  • Continue learning about the structural and stylistic norms of academic writing in the sciences
  • Practice applying APA formatting
  • Practice receiving feedback, deciding how to respond to suggestions, and applying that feedback to a draft

Overview of Tasks

  1. Write your way into the week
  2. Make sure you are signed up for QuickStart Session 4
  3. Read excerpts from “Genre and the Experimental Article” (PDF)
  4. Watch videos on APA formatting
  5. Revise your draft based on feedback from your peer and your own self-evaluation
  6. Optional: Experiment with additional revision activities

Detailed Instructions

Step 1: Write Your Way Into the Week

Here are your thinking questions for this week! Please spend 5-10 minutes freewriting about them (or ignoring them and freewriting more generally), which you can then share with me if you wish or keep to yourself. If you don’t want to write, please at least read the questions and think about them!

  • What questions do you still have about the genre of academic writing in the sciences?
  • How did the feedback you received make you think differently about your paper?
  • What are your current plans for revising your draft? What things do you want to change/improve/work on?

Step 2: Make Sure You Signed Up For QuickStart 4

You can sign up for a time of your choosing here. This is the last one, and will count toward your points for Unit 4.

Step 3: Read Excerpts from “Genre and the Experimental Article”

Click here to view the PDF. I am going to write annotations in Hypothesis to help walk you through the article, so make sure you have Hypothesis activated on the page as you’re reading!

Step 4: Watch Videos on APA Formatting

 

Step 5: Revise Your Paper

Full instructions + rubric are here.

You can turn in your paper on Blackboard, via email, or by posting it here on the site if you want to share your work with your classmates.

Step 6: Additional Revision Activities

As you’re revising, you might know you want to change some more things but not know where to begin. I strongly recommend grading yourself using the real rubric to help you identify what areas you want to work on.

You can also compare your paper to some of the examples we’ve looked at.

If you want to, you and your peer review partner could decide to give each other a second round of comments. 

Or, you could schedule a digital appointment at the writing center.

 

 

Week 9 (10/19-10/25): Natural Science First Draft

Welcome to Week 9, the second week of Unit 3. Click here for a full unit overview. This week, we’ll just be focused on learning some basic genre features of academic science writing and putting them into practice in a first draft. **I strongly encourage you to begin your work for this week early.**

This week we’ll also be back to our normal Zoom schedule of Monday, at 10:50am.

If you have not already done so, ****please fill out the peer review survey now.****

Due Dates

Please send your first draft to me and your peer review partner(s) by the end of the day on Thursday, October 22. For me, you can also just upload the draft to Blackboard. But make sure your classmate gets it too.

Then send comments to your partner and send a peer review report to both me and your partner by the end of the day on Sunday, October 25.

Goals for This Week

  1. Learn some genre features of academic science writing
  2. Put these genre features into practice by creating a first draft of your own imaginary science article

Overview of Tasks

  1. Write your way into the week
  2. Watch a digital lecture on the genre of academic science writing
  3. Read/skim some examples of science articles, looking for the genre features mentioned in the digital lecture
  4. Write a first draft
  5. Send your draft to me and your peer review partner(s)
  6. Read and give feedback on your partner’s draft
  7. Write a peer review report and send it to me and your peer

Detailed Instructions

Step 1: Write Your Way Into The Week

Here are your thinking questions for this week! Please spend 5-10 minutes freewriting about them (or ignoring them and freewriting more generally), which you can then share with me if you wish or keep to yourself. If you don’t want to write, please at least read the questions and think about them!

  1. You may have written “lab reports” in science classes in the past. If so, what do you remember about them? How are they different from other kinds of academic writing you’ve done?
  2. If you were a professional scientist trying to read about someone’s study, perhaps so you can replicate it and see if the results are the same, what information would you want to know? What arrangement or organization would make it easiest for you to find what you need?

Step 2: Watch My Digital Lecture

Part 1 (Structural/Big Picture Genre Features)

Part 2 (Sentence Level Features)

Step 3: Read/Skim Articles

Here are the links to the articles I discuss in the digital lecture, as well as a couple more. Read/skim through for yourselves to find examples of the genre features I discussed and see what they look like in practice.

  1. Imaginary Harry Potter Article
  2. Real Article on Shame and Embarrassment
  3. Imaginary Article on Why Unicorn Poop Is Rainbow
  4. Real Article on Twitter and the 2016 Presidential Election
  5. Phony coronavirus article and my commentary in case you didn’t read them last week

Step 4: Write a First Draft

Click here for full assignment instructions/rubric.

For your first draft, try your best to write a complete draft. (Even if you’re not happy with your writing, you at least have all of the pieces you need.) If circumstances aren’t going to make that possible for you this week, try to write something for each piece of your article– a highly detailed outline is better than no draft at all.

Steps 5-7: Peer Review

I will be emailing you all with your peer review partner assignments, but am waiting to create the groups until more people have filled out the peer review survey.

Please share your paper with your partner according to the peer review method chosen, then give comments/feedback in a form appropriate for your peer review method. (For example, if you’re using Google Docs, use the Commenting feature. If you’re using email, you could write comments using MS Word comments or another program and email, or just write an email with feedback in paragraph or bullet point form.)

You should also share your draft with me, whether you use email, upload it to the course site, or upload it to Blackboard.

In addition to general feedback/comments, please also fill out a peer review report for your peer and share it with both me and them. Click here to view the questions for the peer review report.

Unit 3 Project Instructions and Rubric

Unit 3 Project: Imaginary Scientific Article

The purpose of this project is to practice writing in the genre of academic science articles.

Due Dates

First draft: End of Thursday, 10/22
Peer Review Comments: End of Sunday, 10/25
Revised draft: End of Sunday, 11/1

To begin:

  1. Choose an imaginary world (it can be the same as Unit 1 or a different one). It can be a fantasy world (like Harry Potter), or a fictional version of our own world (like Riverdale).
  2. Imagine a science experiment or study that could take place in that world.
  3. Imagine how the researchers would design their experiment, what they would do, and what kinds of data they would collect.
  4. Decide what you want the results of the experiment/study to be (this is NOT part of the scientific process. We are ONLY doing this because it is imaginary, so we have no real data).
  5. Make up some data that supports those results.
  6. If you were a scientist in your imaginary situation, doing your imaginary research, what pre-existing articles might exist that you would want to refer to? For example, if you’re making up an experiment conducted in Stranger Things 2, maybe you refer to an imaginary previous paper based on the events of Season 1. For starters, come up with a title and author name for each imaginary source.

Once you have completed the imagination work, now it’s time to write!

Your article should:

  1. Use APA formatting (have an APA-style title page, have a running head, have an abstract and key words, use APA subheading styles)
  2. Include all of the major sections of a scientific article (Introduction, Methods, Results, Analysis/Discussion, Conclusion)
  3. In each paragraph, follow conventions for academic writing (topic sentence, information, explanation/analysis of information, conclusion/transition sentence)
  4. Include an imaginary works cited page (also in APA style—3 imaginary sources)
  5. Use a sentence-level conventions appropriate for scientific writing (third person, passive voice, objective tone, etc.)

Rubric (graded out of 10 points)

APA Formatting (0.2 points each for a total of 2 points)

  • Title page ___
  • Title ____
  • Name ___
  • University ____
  • Correct Running Head First Page ____
  • Correct Running Head Subsequent Pages ____
  • Page Numbers ____
  • Abstract ___
  • Keywords ___
  • Beginning of works cited page is titled “References” ___

Structural Genre Norms (1 point each for a total of 4 points)

  • Article is divided according to the major sections of a scientific paper and includes all of these sections ___
  • These sections are labeled with APA-style subheadings ___
  • Each paragraph is focused around one subtopic or piece of information ____
  • Each paragraph includes a topic sentence, analysis or interpretation of the information, and a conclusion or transition sentence ___

Stylistic Genre Norms (1 point each for a total of 3 points)

Article consistently exhibits:

  • Use of the third person ___
  • Passive voice when appropriate ___
  • Formal tone/word choice ___

Works Cited/References (0.5 points each for 1 point total)

  • Article includes 3 imaginary sources that are referenced in the body of the article and documented in APA style in a references section ___
  • The imaginary sources make sense within the context of the chosen imaginary world and make sense as sources that would be referenced within a scientific paper ___